Feedback

Things we need to change:

-  We found that some of the clips could be shortened, the bath plug and the shot of him getting out the bath.

-  The shot of Sterling at the end sitting on the coach needs to be slightly longer so that we get to see Sterling's feet and the edge of the coach.This is because otherwise he looks too inclosed and cramped in the little space we get to see.

-  The font style needs to be changed as you cannot read some of the words well as the font characters look like different letters.

-  We also need to change the music as the speed and tempo is too repetitive. We could add lower tones to create a more tense atmosphere.

-  One last thing we need to look at is finding a different production company that suits our film and genre. We also need to check that the titles are in the correct order. ( Production x2 )